The Preloader is broken. You have to right click and press play. Re-post when you fix this.
When you said short, you meant short! It's a nice little experiment, which is what I guess it was intended to be. Keep working on it. I see some potential here. 4/10
Very original. Props, man. 10/10
Has a nice "Epic" feel.
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